Wednesday, June 04, 2008

...ohh!

my fake poetry,
if it can be called,
deceives.

misses an essence,
a carry-over,
miscalculated!

ohh shit!
i have missed it - this is bad!
no! its worse!!

there wasn't a line,
you,
only repercussion -
me

3 comments:

Vulnerable said...

Better to kill
By mutiliating veins
than to kill by
Abstract Poetry

Sangharsha said...

... hmm,
I didn't realize it was too harsh.
& i don't have that courage!

Ashish Lohorung Rai said...

hi Sangharsha....the d2hawkian...are u the die hard fan of Einstein? but you seems the follower of Devkota writing moslty poems..anyway nice blogs..keep it u ani swimming kahile jane?